Location descriptions


I've had some feedback regarding the location descriptions and I've revisited the code. I have decided they are too 'fragrant' which isn't really my style so I have decided to work through them and simplify them somewhat. 

As the game was a collaboration of ideas and submissions from members of our local hackspace and then brought together by myself in Adventuron, I didn't really consider or see that the descriptions were too detailed. I guess this is one of the issues with having a 'creative writer' within the membership roster!  It goes without saying that this writer isn't very experienced with retro style text adventures.

There is likely many more description updates, apologies for this but in the long term this will probably be beneficial to the overall game and more true to my own style of writing! 

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